Credit
Risk is a crime thriller about Jack, a bank IT
guy, who wants to be a full time actor, but has to provide for his wife and two
kids, while getting involved with a friend and former porn star, Jenny, who is
raped by Jack’s twin brother Will, which implicates Jack for the crime, who is now
pursued by own his sister-in-law detective, and two other cops, who are
actually more interested in surveillance of Jenny the famous porn star.
Credit Risk is like Pretty
Woman, but not as pretty, not as Cinderella fantasy, not as rich, more down
to earth, more complicated, real world dangerous, about real people, and in the
street instead of a penthouse. It’s about a former porn star, not a call girl.
But they are both about the stigma towards women of certain professions. They are both about women and men looking to live in a better place than where they are. They are both about taking risks for money. They are both about finding love as redemption. And they are both about finding a way out, and finding a way to beat the odds.
But they are both about the stigma towards women of certain professions. They are both about women and men looking to live in a better place than where they are. They are both about taking risks for money. They are both about finding love as redemption. And they are both about finding a way out, and finding a way to beat the odds.
I wrote this story,
based on true events. I was, and still am, an IT guy, and that means I go
through periods of unemployment when companies decide to outsource or
restructure. I also have a family with three children. So I’ve been in
challenging financial situations for years, and yet I’ve always had a love for making
movies and acting. I’ve had my car nearly repossessed until I locked it in a
garage. I’ve had times where it was challenging just to get a few dollars
together to buy a loaf of bread for my kids to make peanut butter sandwiches. I
never knew a porn star. But I can understand the financial binds that cause
people to get into that business where it can be easy to make a lot of money
fast.
I did make a short
film with a bedroom scene once, and my grade school aged children somehow got
the impression that there were naked actors in our house. There was no nudity.
But their teachers got wind of this and we had some explaining to do. I think a
tasteful love scene can be beautiful. And they do help to sell a movie.
Financial binds are
hard on a marriage. And my wife was never too happy with my unpaid acting jobs.
Other actors out there are much like me, striving to keep their head above
water so they can take acting classes and try to get some decent roles. So all
of these experiences contributed to the writing of this screenplay.
I also like thrillers
where someone is running to stay alive. The threat of death or pain is a great
character motivation. It can carry you all the way through a story, until the
threat is neutralized. In this film Will
is the evil twin rapist, and yet I think every bad guy has a good side and
every good guy has a bad side. So while Will was wrong to rape Jenny at the
start of the story, you have to understand that it started out as mutual sex
and just got too rough. [trailer]
The light gets broken
and goes out. Jenny gets cut with blood coming down her legs and it looks horrific.
But really, what happens is that Will, in the process of picking up glass in
the dark tries to grab Jenny and cuts her leg, making it look worse than it
really is. Or did he maybe try to rape her with a chard of glass?
In any case, Jenny is
in shock and in fear for her life. All she knows it that the room went dark and
she felt pain. So her instinct is to run
away from Will. And yet Will is a bad guy looking to get over by implicating
his brother in his crimes. So the danger persists as Will worms his way into
Jenny’s confidence and gets close to her. In the end he attempts to attack her
again, but this time she’s ready and turns the tables on him. Finally Jack is implicated and due to the
identical DNA that they share, Will and Jack are exonerated. But Will also has
a predator after him.
So it’s not a lot of
violence. It’s more of a cat and mouse game with dangerous predators, mistaken
identity, and two people in the face of danger, trying to scratch and claw
their way into the kind of life they want to live. Everybody deserves a good life. You deserve a
good life. Just like Jenny shouldn’t
have to do porn to survive, neither should any of us have to do jobs hat we
hate, just to eat. So it’s a story about all of us really.
Now, we need to fund
our development phase even to be considered by distributors and investors as a
serious project. We need to complete this short film version of the project to
demonstrate our potential to deliver. We want to take advantage of the recent section
181 laws that allows investors to claim 100% of their film investment as
deductible on their taxes. We want to offer not just perks, but investment
opportunities online as the new Jobs Act has now allowed. For these things we
need to register as a company, we need to hire a lawyer for the duration, and
we need to have a professional film budget and shooting schedule done by a
production manager. We may need to interest a co-producer with an established
production company that can crew the film. We need to apply for state tax
incentives. We need to print pitch materials like posters, maintain a website,
go to film markets. All of this comes to around at least $50,000. And that
would put us in the game to make this film.
And we’ll take this
one step at a time. We’ll do continual research, tweak the script if necessary,
rethink casting options, locations, and so on. Once we get the development
stage funded we’ll pitch the project to distributors, and investors, and show
them a trailer and scenes from our short film.
We do have a
preliminary cursory budget of about $750,000 for the project. We could probably
make the film for that amount without stars. But I think if we can get even
half that amount together we will have the leverage to attract a few stars like
Ryan Gosling, Bradley Cooper, Jessica Chastain, Michelle Williams, or maybe Michael
Shannon or Jennifer Lawrence. And I like all those
actors a lot. Ok, they sound expensive. But they’re known to consider passion
projects if they like the script. And we have to be funded for them to take us
seriously. Just their interest alone would then attract additional funding to
give us a bigger budget. We can do this.